Royal Flush
The bright hot sun shone on us as they ran up to collect the cards. I smelt the fresh air surrounding me. My team members were Danielle, Jam, Nikora and Rangitunoa. As Jam was running back to our team, he fell straight on his face. Once Nikora got back to our team we realised we had been collecting the wrong cards. We were supposed to be getting spades but instead we were collecting clubs. After that I was 100% sure we were going to lose, Cars zoomed past as we played the game. The bright light blue sky had very few light blue fluffy clouds. I wondered when it was going to be over?
Hi Chloe! I really like this story because the description is really great. You could try work on explaining what happened in the end more :)
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ReplyDeleteHI Chloe, I really like your story because it is funny and cool. I liked how
ReplyDeleteyou talked a lot about how the weather is doing. Thats a cool ame for the story you got there too.